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Post by jacky holster burkie on Aug 29, 2009 21:43:21 GMT -5
Alrighty everyone! I have been planning for this moment the day I made his bio. The character is the one that saved Jacky when he was shot... I'll post his whole history here. The part you need to know is the part in bold
Jack's birth was never suppose to happen. Marie and Joesph agreed they never wanted kids. Marie didn't want to put up with the constant need of little children, as she saw what they did when she went shopping, or went to eat, or even bring you kids to work day. Joesph knew they could never have time for any children either, as they both worked hard and long. On top of that, they were living large with tons of money, as they only spent it on themselves. Life was good! Why would they bring something into the world that would change all of that? As you could see by their careers, they were smart people.
So when the doctor told Marie, 'your pregnant', she about had a heart attack. Both of them were strictly against abortions, but they didn't know what else to do. The word 'adoption' was put to mind, but Marie was adopted, and she didn't want anyone to feel the want she did. The want to know her real parents, or what her life would have been liked if they kept her. That's another reason why when they were considering it, she said she refused adoption. So, two richies on snob hill eventually brought home little baby Jacky.
However, at a young age, his father abused him on a stressful day of work. Jacky couldn't remember a lot, but he remembered it being painful. It lasted for the longest time, probably up to when he was 12, before he ran away for good. He found a neighborhood he could live in, but the problem was this neighborhood wasn't anything well. He still didn't know any of his powers, as he really didn't try, and had no use for them. A women named Eveyln took him in, and reassured him he was safe. She had three other adopted boys, Joesph, Bobbie, and Angel. They made a great team, though Jacky was the smallest. They grew up in Junior High if you messed with one of us, you'd better hope you wouldn't be dead the next morning.
One day, Joesph, Bobbie, and Jacky were walking home, wondering where Angel ran off to. They found Angel on the way, getting beat up by several drunk high schoolers. They fought them off, with pocketknives of course, and turned toward Angel. He was dieing. While Bobbie and Joesph were tearing up and trying to find someway to help them, saying, 'no, you got to stay with us Angel, stay with us'. Jacky touched Angel's arm, and the dark bruise disappeared. Jacky blinked twice, and then touched Angel's chest (heart). It did nothing. Confused, he tried again with a different bruise. He felt his energy rushing away from him, but he kept going. Finally, enough was healing in which the heart healed itself since there wasn't any bruises and blood flow was good. Angel and Jacky became the closest that day.
The day he discovered his second power was a dreadful day. They were waiting for Evelyn to get home, who had fixed them up (they are congressmen compared to what they WOULD have been), but she never came. Turns out there was a shooting in the mall, but someone called the hit on her for raising four boys to what they were today. The four brothers all watched the video with the guys, shooting thier mother after he already got the money. Jacky was frustrated and thought just one the guy that pulled the trigger. Next moment, he saw him in his mind, collecting the money from the guy that hired the hit. Jacky knew where he was, which was the day he discovered his second power.
All four brothers went, and two of his brothers killed the guys, as they never let innocent Jacky do such things and told him to look away instead, and then they were dead. Not too long after, when the one that hired them figured out they were on their tail, one of them started to mess with Jacky, throwing snowballs at him. Annoyed, Jacky ran to them, but he ended up being shot. Groaning with pain, while the three others fought the one that shot him, a girl covered in a black cloak came up to him. Her eyes were dark brown with long dark brown hair, and she touched Jacky's wound, and it healed. Amazed he wasn't the only one, he asked, 'who are you?'
She only responded with, 'it doesn't matter. i saw you find that guy a couple of nights ago, and i know what you can do. You must go to society boarding high! They teach you to control your powers and extend them so you don't waste all energy.' She explained. 'Bye'. With that, she ran off. Jacky ran after her, but she was gone. He slowed down, sighing, and never saw her again.
So, this means that I would need the girl to have dark brown hair and dark brown eyes. I really don't care what pb you use. In fact, you can have whatever pb with brown eyes, and pretended they died it or something. Just something that would match the history. He has been looking for her throughout the school, and I want him to find her. I kind of wanted her to be in some life threatning situation, as Jacky probably wouldn't pay attention unless something like that happened (and i want jackie to save the dayness Eventually, I would adore them to be a couple.
The girl's personality probably has to be pretty nice if she gives Jacky advice on coming to the school. She could be a bitch to everyone, but that being a mask. It doesn't matter, as long as it fits my little plot. She is chosen, and one of her powers must be healing. Whatever else is up to you. Also, one more thing, she can't NOT like people like Jacky, for it would ruin the whole purpose, so please, if you may. Rper, I'm not picky on either, as long as they usualy do length. Lengthy means a couple of nice paragraphs. No one liner peoples please. Whooo!
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Post by Brooklyn Amber Smith on Aug 29, 2009 22:20:19 GMT -5
Wouldn't Brooklyn work then? haha. x D The only thing is she doesn't have healing, but I can always talk to Hailz about changing one of her powers to healing. Haha.
edit - Hailz let me change a power to healing. I'm a huge loser. i know. Jacky just catches my eye. x ]
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Post by jacky holster burkie on Aug 30, 2009 18:39:36 GMT -5
Haha! There is two really funny things I found with that... one, I actually originally wanted Ashley Greene as the pb, but of course, you made the character, so I just said any with dark hair and dark eyes X3
And two, Jacky catches my eye too I want him to be real SOOO bad... you have no idea....
Yay! Perhaps at first Jacky doesn't reconize her until they get out of the stables into the acutal light, then he can go, 'o.o' X3
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